The magnificent creature takes flight, pushes realities limits on how such a living thing can be so elegant. Its silver-gray feathers carry its weight as it flutters. It truly is a sight to behold. I lay my now thought of average body down on the silk tipped grass to wonder how anything came to be. An existential thought. Life is common but this is something else.
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Kia ora Luca,
ReplyDeleteThis is a really amazing piece of writing, you have used some lovely descriptive words. The silk tipped grass sounds like it would be soft to lie down on. What inspired you to write this?
Miss Ribotton
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ReplyDeleteKia ora luca
ReplyDeleteI really like your post because the sentences are really detailed
maybe next time your could talk about how the bird looks and maybe some facts about it.