This is my Pobble 365 writing piece in which i chose a photo and described it. Enjoy!
Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Tuesday, April 13, 2021
Another world
The glistening horizon shines brightly like a burning star. The immense mountain blocks the view of the glamorous shining night sky. You watch in ore as the the giant planet slowly fades into the darkness. you walk down the mysterious road to nowhere. you wander in hope that the miraculous sight would come back but no matter how far you walk, you will never be able to experience such a deep encounter with the natural forces ever again. The mysterious fog remains situated just in front you. you stand still. Waiting for something that will never come. You do not know what you are waiting for yet you remain still. Waiting just waiting.
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